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To the person who said all they see is a weak idiot... couldn't you have just waited? Lol. This is pretty good. Eh gets stronger. I really like his mentor.I will say their were some plot elements that could have been handled betterSpoiler
he gets this hour glass that I thought was going to be put to btter use but it literally doesn't mentioned until several chapters later (literally forgot he still had it) when he randomly needs help and it breaks because the significance was the sand inside it. Like, there could have been more of an explanation. It felt kind of forced to me
[collapse]The world background is so cool though. I get the feeling Spoilerhis mentor is gonna die soon.... and he'sgoing to inherit the sword.... I jist feel it in my bones. Someone please tell me I'm wrong. Pls.
[collapse]That's just my prediction. I took a break from reading and I'll come back to see.