Guide the Villain Father to Be Virtuous Chapter 51 Discussion

plot is attractive but gap between theory and practice is 2 wide.

1 star immediately taken off = author forgetting backstory of own character

(""Just yesterday, she had received the admission notice from her ideal university, only one step away from fulfilling her dream. But in a blink of an eye, she transformed from a full-ranked boss to a newbie?") btw narcissim level 99.. full rank boss for being a top score exam entry? phsst no! Boss is mega-family heir or when you found your own mega family

She was a somewhat obnoxious hard worker climbing education with no close family ties dragged by some system into a novel she never read. No accident, overstudy or late night gaming pass out. System doesn't even give her an advanced body as promised (stronger/agile/CO-Ordinated). System is the real villain if any character is, 3d most sadistic (level of task vs available assistance) I've seen.

minus star 2 for having characters hard to root for or even hate in a background that is vague and facade-like. It is like being served a soup that was watered down and reheated. The ingredients are fine but dish is only "edible".

Spoiler

The thot og FL is annoying in her pursuit of villain.. as if she knows she needs his dead body to step on to succeed her HE

MC is more obnoxious than necessary. As a parent of 3 precocious kids... I know sassy. She misses the cute mark because the fact she IS 18 inside. With migration at 18, even if she formerly a person who -maybe- earned her 'do what I want" attitude, she should also always be aware of 3 year countdown and adapt. The tit for tat child/parent battle lost cute factor by battle #3. And author has reader use mental gymnastics to accept changes and flip flops. My 18 y self would never put myself in risks in infant body that has no weight, balance or coordination! Nor avenge on adult that were denying access to danger. The seaside adventure was. not. cute. Getting help from doting Grandpa, knowing he is in ill health and could have mortal episode if over stimulated? starting conflict because not allowed to mess in tideline as 18 mo old? because previous action made a tether mandatory? She NEVER reflects

villain MC dad is boring, tsundere character fail

I cant feel attached to any characters.

Support characters has a few vibrant or cute personalities like Huo household and villain's homies; but they (naturally) don't have the screen time.

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Not the worst novel out there, but it is severely missing.. a something