After Mermaid O Got the Su Shuang’s Script Chapter 58 Discussion

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So I don't know if this novel is dropped or not but the author really rushed the end and the extra doesn't even have an end? The main story is 57 chapters and then there's one extra that has an incomplete cliff hanger end? Also there's a 1 year time skip in the end and it's just the HE marriage and then it mentions what happened to conclude the whole schemes and conspiracies and all the related victories like the court ruling.

The MC and ML gets married in chapter 57. The MC became the mermaid king.

Honestly read this for the mermaid bl interstellar setting because I love this genre but the MC doesn't seem that mermaid like after leaving the deserted planet in the first half of the book so enjoy the cuteness of tail wraps and making bubbles while it lasts. I think if the author didn't rush it so much in the second half there could be a lot of great explanations like the MC using his powers to heal the mermaids, the negotiations and how he first went to the the mermaid planet, or even if a mermaid omega and a human alpha could mark since it's OBA?

Overall it was a pleasant read! But it feels more like one arc from a quick transmigration novel than a full book. I do however recommend it especially if you've just finished reading a long novel that drawled on and made you tired. This was refreshing because it was so short too. So there are positives and negatives. But thank you author for another mermaid BL💙
 
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