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c16:So far the story has been pretty good, although very little has actually happened so its hard to really judge.The one thing that really does worry me about the book is it going in the direction of the FL being the saint (the child he took in) for pretty obvious reasons. Theres a shocking number of books like this, where its a father adopting a daughter, that for some reason instead of just having them have a family relationship instead develops in a romantic direction, so I'm really hoping that this story does not develop in that direction, although unfortunately with tags like romance and younger love interest it feels likely that it will.C21:Yeah... its pretty much confirmed that the saint is the FL which no matter how the author does it I won't be able to like their relationship so I'll be dropping this now. I'll leave it at 3 starts since the writing itself doesn't seem to be bad, I just hate the direction the story went in.
