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Sorry, again, the translation, it just doesn’t cut it for me. Confusing to an extend. You want to know if a story has a good understandable writing? Put it into an audio form and listen to it. If you can understand who says what, and when; etc. you’ll know that it’s a good quality writing, which helps the reader see through the eyes of the author. It’s well conveyed for the other parties. Now! In the other hand! if it’s all over the place, with no sense or point of direction... then... buddy... it’s a bad writing. Im sorry. I ain’t blaming the translator, maybe it’s the story itself, who knows.