- #1
The beginning is good, maybe better than a lot of isekai story. It's still ok until the battle with dragons. After that, the story is just like a bunch of kids playing together.
- The author writes a lot of sentences, that or it's really bad sometimes or just meaningless.
- She tries to save money (well it's a fine reason) but then she does a lot of thing for fun (and for me it's seem like for free, because the story doesn't mention about what she gets later, maybe just a relationship with some higher-ups).
- Well she does have connection but she never uses it. She is also cold and anti-social with other nobles and doesn't care about them. However she still wants to sell her goods to other noble's territory. Everything she does is just playing around or taking care of her stores. I don't even know if she can somehow save 80, 000 gold (because she just sells things to commoners or asks some sla.. People to sell it). At least she has a territory.
- She always relies on earth items and if she brings something new, no one dare to ask her where she gets those. It feels like "oh it's from Shrine Maiden so it's fine".