Saving 80,000 Gold in an Another World for Retirement Chapter 58 Discussion

It was great at the beginning, but after the dragon incident the author's writing style had an important shift and bacame very tedious to read.

Funa started being so repetitive on things that didn't matter and began to write in very short sentences, producing an incredibly poor narrative and low cohesion story. To that add the fact that translation wasn't the best... it became a pain to read.

But don't get me wrong, is not a translation problem, translation is just an additional issue. I have read other web novels with bad translations that aren't as bothersome to read as this one.