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Translation quality starts good but declines to the point of barely comprehensible as it shifts from one translator to another. Japanese seems very redundant to an English speaker when directly translated and a good TL knows when to remove the excess.The story is similar in that way, it starts off interesting then just falls apart. She treats nobles badly even though they are the best way to reach her supposed goal. She apparently gets some high level connections on Earth at some point but never mentions when or how she gets them. She is very bad at making her store's products pass as from the same world, leaving everything wrapped/bottled in plastic, and not even looking into what other stores are selling to know what the market is like. And everyone just accepts and likes her in typical Mary Sue fashion.