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Sad to say this novel had so much potential that it just fails....Sure you could still enjoy it, but the holes in the story and events..... you could make a new religion out of it (pun intended) So the Shrine Maiden thing is still funny as a running gag. yet that is basically the only running gag (well besides the whole earl son trying to win her over) that is done well. I loved the dragon battle, loved the first time she was at the earls house, also even enjoyed the invasion and start of the territory arc. However it feels like a bunch of kindergartners playing with the teacher that just lets them do whatever they want cause its a job. Maybe I should even go as far as a preschool setting.So many problems that have also been stated by others on the reviews, and if you read comments while reading, you will find mine that destroy many things that anyone with 10 mins on google would be able to see. It is obvious that the author either thinks he is always right, or doesn't care enough to be rational on many things. Still, the premise is enjoyable, the read is still fun sometimes. and after the whole wolf fang vs the army part, you can skip many parts, even chapters, and still enjoy/follow it decently. Just like his other novel I read, 'I will live with potions' it abandons so many parts of the story that it sets up as if it keeps getting passes to new authors (hence my many kids analogy)