Someday Will I Be The Greatest Alchemist? Chapter 183 Discussion

This is basically me rant around, im sorry.

I wish author to change the title to "Someday will I be the greatest s*ave?"

That's really what his character is... A s*ave

I'm not exaggerating because everyone can order him to do anything

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Too many error author did from status character, common sense, profit money etc

But boyyy, this MC is not a dense one (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

- too many error about their status Level, even if the system say Lv up 2x author can yeet them out and just Lv 1x. Also don't shock if the next chapter the Level is downgrade till 1 - 3 or even didn't exist lol

- lack of common sense. MC said he don't want to conspicuous but all his action say otherwise, from speedrun rank adventure to produce divin era tech. He's the YES MAN to everyone either it villager, merchant, king, and even great spirit. He'll do anything from merchant milking him produce technology for their profit to turn him into s*avery by great spirit

Spoiler

Every single great spirit order him to do what they want and don't considering his will and freedom. If you pass chapter 183 when his s*ave soul is shown, your IQ would drop to negative -_-

He knows Magic circle/pattern for magic device is very rare to one understand because it is Human & Elf ancient language but still his common sense is not yet develope like selling divin era device and don't know how great it was

Did he got braindead or something?

It's an illnes for Japanese author tbh...

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- first trading, MC basically sell his goods underpay (btw they know his goods class is SUPERIOR not like on the market). Second trading, merchant basically not gain any profit from what their conversation goes (maybe im the wrong here, but you can read it by yourself)

- Time skip is really really really inconsistent, irrelevant & useless. Author skip 1 years and MC just grinding 5 Lv??? Time skip is basically to fill the gap author made for the plot and not really think about character status like they just sit in home for the entire 1 years and do nothing like adventure or beating some monster to Level up

Spoiler

Goddess Norn-sama take MC to 3 years in the past from the time Hero summoning so author just yeet time skip so the plot can continue without thinking... "why their status still the same even after 1 year"

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Even author can't count character age lol