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Compared to most isekai I've read, the opening is decent. There is nothing of the typical "Oh no I'm scared of fighting and blood and shit" and "It's a girl... I will blush". A hundred and dozens down the line is when sh*t started crumbling down.Spoiler
Full of plot holes. There was one time where the MC starts to monologue how he can't appraise others to know their skills and whatnot when he certainly can while he's buying his first s*ave. There's also when they're on their trip to the Dwarven country when one of the dwarf said "Imma visit my mom and pops" then sometime in the future he said "I no longer have parents and no siblings" wtf? Then came the nail in the coffin. The typical beta MC character trait. Some typical shitty noble wants the MC dead, one of his wives kidnapped and the others to be r*ped. Private guards, mercenaries, and dark guild members were mobilized but our oh-so-mighty MC just said "Leave the guards so that it can serve as a warning". Fcking hell.
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