- #1
The story is all over the place. The chapters don't focus on the main couple enough. Instead the author writes a whole bunch of little tidbits about different things that may have been a part of a plot, but then does not make it into a whole. So what I've read mostly tells me nothing of worth.There was like 2 chapters where I felt that there was finally time for the main couple, but after 53 chapters, it's not significant at all. I would have been alright with this if it was slow burn, but the mini piece plots cover everything instead of giving them any progression.