Low IQ Supporting Female, Waiting for Death Online Chapter 20.1 Discussion

Unfortunately this is painful to read. I'm sure the original novel is decent, but the translation quality and editing could use a bit more work. Currently, the sentece flow is bad, and there are multiple places that should have different phrase used for Western audience, as direct translation doesn't convey the meaning.

There is also a problem of choppy conversations, but that might be more of a fault with the original author. There is also problem with editing on that side of the things, as author conveys same idea multiple times making it annoying to read.