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The MC's actions are all well and fine and pretty funny though I would've liked it if she was smarter about her actions, like if she sensed something that was not going all along the plot she would change her actions and drive the plot along more. I guess the sense of dissonance comes from the ML's actions? I'm not sure honestly because it feels like the author is trying to make the ogML scum but then the ML seems pretty logical? And like I don't know I guess I just don't know why he likes the FL. Like why does he care what happens to her? Like at most it seems like they would just return to strangers and maybe acquaintances at best? Maybe I'm just missing something but I don't feel invested in the story which I'm pretty surprised by because the premise is good, the FL's attitude is great, I like the ML feeling regret but just something is off.
[collapse]I didn't really write a review sorry but I just had to rant because I was so confused and really at this point, I would appreciate someone just taking the time to explain the first world's plot to me or something. Even though I'm honestly not sure what I'm confused about and was just curious if anyone is getting the same vibe as me.