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It should be 4/5, but I give it 5/5 because it has that much potential.The main idea of this novel is a VR game in isekai. Since it's pretty clear in other reviews, let's go straight to the pros and cons of this novel in my opinion. Sorry first, I'm better at writing cons so maybe the pros are less interesting..Pros:1. Albus (MC) is likeable. He is diligent, interesting, full of ideas, and is quick to solve problems.2. Many interesting characters appear. Sometimes we get POV from them too. Most of the female characters can be called potential heroines too. So, a plus for those who like the combination of fantasy + harem genres. But. Romance Subplot, many female characters like Albus, but Albus doesn't care about romance so this genre is not included in the main genre.3. The development of the story is quite unique and very intriguing, there are many elements in the story that can be developed in the future.Cons:1. The story sometimes jumps around (unclear timeline), sometimes even skipping several scenes without giving the reader any clues (some are told in flashback form). It's still interesting, but it can be confusing.2. Characters need more development. I mentioned the pros that there are many interesting characters, but most of them don't appear often. The author only presents characters that can advance the story, without caring about the depth of the story.3. I'm not sure whether it's the Author's lack of experience or a translation error.... I often finding inconsistencies in this novel (just minor but often occurs). Maybe, some of it changed because something happened during the time skip. (need story refinement).