Naruto System in One Piece Chapter 8 Discussion

The author just do whatever he wants :-/ Usually it shouldn't be a problem since it's a fanfiction and a lot of authors change some things to make their writing easier or some are just mistakes not really wanted by them but here the author just change things for no reason and act like it's normal -_-

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the MC can use Chidori without problem despite not having the sharingan (or something who could replace it) and it only consume a weak amount of chakra.

Chakra control is just there to know if a technique can be used or not but doesn't have any effect on the amount of chakra spend to use a technique.

The fighting style of Kakashi's father became a S-rank ninjutsu.... Just wtf it doesn't make any sense, at least the other points were for the sake of laziness

The author tried to explain why the MC can increase his mana by a lot easily but it's just really weird (he ate a rare species of animal and gained a huge amount of mana.... Butnow that I think about it, since chidori doesn't use much mana increase is not really huge-_-)

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Furthermore the MC is dumb

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His needs to exchange money with the system to gain new powers, items,... but the MC forgot to take the highly rewarded Baggy after killing him (or he might have taken him without it being mentioned, if that's the case then he doesn't care about the corpse rotting).... And for some reason he can navigates the huge ship on his own

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And the system is really very very annoying

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It appeared after around 1 month with no explanation. No you survived 1 month in a strange world and are now worthy of me, or you ate a devil fruits rather than having it's power you have me, or you have reach the minimum amount of money needed to activate me, or you killed you 1st person and is now worthy of me,...

The 1st thing it did after appearing was to tease the MC in a really bad moment, and it tease the MC each time it is able to :-/

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I don't recommand this fanfiction, I know it's hard to find good fanfiction but unfortunately you must search some more time