- #1
The translation is pretty good for this novel, but there are so many inconsistencies in each arc that it ruined it for me. The author was very wishy washy in how they planned each arc.Like a lot of other authors, in this novel you can see multiple perspective and thoughts on each character, not just the MC and ML. And ordinarily that’s fine, but the author is very inconsistent when it comes to the antagonist point of view. In one chapter you can read what the antagonist is thinking and then the next, every thought you read from is redundant because the author changes the characterization. If it’s done good then it’s an excellent read, but the transitions were so poor that it seemed forced. It’s the worst in arcs 3 and 6, so fair warning.
