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Like NoobaLoob said there is a big problem of logic in this story. The MC take the long route to become a magician when he could just take a magic item that let him use magic. Spoiler
But the big problem is why is there a test for newby? In The King of the Battlefield in was said it was because of salomon but there is no reason there, just because crazy magician summon people to make them s*ave and give thing to other people for no reason. Take concept from Reincarnator like one monster that suposed to be unkillable.
The plot is:He take the long route to become a magician to kill an enemy with an immunity to physical attack. To do this, he go to a tutorial. The tutorial is a copy from reincarnator that summon people to kill them? It also give advantage to people for no reason. He could just have used artifact that do magic for him, but it is convenient to the plot so the MC don't do this.
[collapse] The base concept is good and average story telling I would rate 3/4 star.