Two as One Princesses Chapter 143 Discussion

It's a pretty good read and the machine translation is readable if you ever want to binge. BUT!!! It has some real problems.

Starting with non spoilers

1. The MC gets OP far too quickly and to the point where the author has trouble building a story around him/her/them
2. lots of plot elements that just get buried
3. Far too many good things from nowhere.
4. Far too many really s*upid things that are nonsensical (Think on the level of footloose where a town bans dancing and music then amp that up not to 11 but 30)

The really big problem is that around the middle of the second arc the author seems to have written themselves into a corner and can't do anything with it, so he starts grasping at straws.

The best way to read this is to that point in the 2nd arc where the MC has their future laid out for them and stop.. You'll know when you get there it's like a revelation from on high.

Spoiler

Really big problems that can't be talked about except as spoilers

1. The Bad Guy who is torturing them as part of 10 year project is never seen from again. They have no desire to do anything about the idiot despite the fact he tortured them for a decade.
2. Most of their for the first 80 chapters or so is spent running from a guy, who they have no evidence of him chasing them.
3. MC is ridiculously OP. I mean Isekai Cheat magician is looking in their direction and going "WTF man."
4. During the 2nd arc it looks like the author lost it, and realized he had no idea what to do, so what does he come up with ? He's sending the MC and their maid to swords and sorcery High School !!! Undercover. Why Undercover because they rescued royalty from a nearby kingdom and the Royal offered them a very nice reward in a condescending way. So instead of sending a polite reply back and maybe letting the kids have a play date, because that might start a war, they go Clark Kent and go to High School in said kingdom. FACEPALM
5. For "REASONS" at the end of the 2nd arc MC1 turns down his protective barrier on MC2 why ? Because. Prediction incoming very bad thing for MC2, why ? Because author is has to come up with something.

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TLDR: STOP at that point in the middle. You will know when you get there.

Spoiler

They get a visit from god telling them their longterm fate.

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