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I'm kind of wondering if it's heading for a more of a yuri ending? (Thou no tags) The way Ceil messes with Ain at times in the bath & the way she seems to at times tease Ain. Seems like it's leading to the real reason Ceil wanting Ain to have a body is more to be able to have a face to face relationship. They already act like a couple & want to stay with each other forever, even up to becoming goddesses. Just my opinion.
[collapse]SpoilerThe courtship letter leading up the academy is kind of weird part. Why put that in, if the MC's are not going to accept it. Best to just go with sending her as a quest to go after the person Fii wants dealt with & leave the letter part out. So sounds like author wanted to force the story to go the Academy route suddenly. Just a weird way to do it. Plus it takes away from what the Mc's wanted to do originally to visit the ocean at different places & the become a gods faster. Fii should know their goal by now, but yet says things like "endless opportunities to go to school in the future". How will that happen if they are pushing to ascend as soon as possible? "It's best for them to be able to travel freely between countries", I thought being her daughters basically makes her royalty & can cross boarders easier? So they have less time in the world before acceding, so better to let them travel & be hunters, then pushing academy way. JMO
[collapse]SpoilerThe academy part is getting annoying.
I'd say the story is good up to before the part where they get the letter from the prince, then it just loses momentum & becomes a wreck. I tried skimming some of the chapters to see if it clears up, but just some of it doesn't make sense to go this route based off the goals of the 2 MC's.
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