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Honestly I kinda don't like this rn. I know the author said in the beginning, this is a nonsense tech book, but I as a reader still need to comprehend it if the author continues to talk about space prisons, planet explosions etc as according to the plot background etc.The fact is you lost me. I don't f*cking understand. Maybe it's my reading comprehension, but there's a lot of words with little meaning. The world background is poorly done imo bc I don't get it; dude also I still don't understand what they meant by planet explosion that isn't a explosion? Hello? Then The author keeps hyping up the ML terrorist with little to no actual detail. The mc/mops the whole time: that guy is so dangerous. The "dangerous guy": stands there and is powerful. Also the mc: no panic no fear just annoyance. I feel the danger. Sike. Stop telling, more showing damn it!!Also the first 7 chapters is just the book description regurgitated. I suspect everything gets better sure in later chapters, but its lack of world building has left me too f*cking confused to continue rn.
