Guardian (Bu Hui Xia Qi) Chapter -- Discussion

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It feels aimless and boring... like the story could've been more compressed and ended earlier.

I know this is supposed to be slice of life but the plot is actually more dogblooded than anything. Almost like the author was trying to compensate for the lack of the story's vitality.

It just doesn't come alive unlike the other slice-of-life novels here.
 
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