After Transmigrating into the Cyber Game, I Defeated the Boss and Successfully Rose to the Top Chapter Extra Discussion

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It was soooo good. Thank you for the excellent translation. The chapter is quite long between 2.5k to 3k words. There was even more than 6k++ words for one chapter. MTL won't do it. They can't describe as detail as the author write. For example from foxaholic translator izzain Spoiler

With a sharp crack, the bullet hit its mark! The spinning bullet struck directly into the chest of the parasitic hydra, instantly perforating its body and creating a bowl-sized hole. As dried flesh scattered around the cavity, no blood flowed.

Before Kui Xin could even savor the satisfaction of hitting the target, she rapidly pulled the trigger again. Bullets continuously fired from the barrel, striking the parasitic hydra's head, abdomen, shoulders, waist, and legs! Its parasitized form resembled a battered puppet, barely maintaining human shape.

[collapse] Ah~~ you can imagine the scene. The plot is compact with no unnecessary things.

The style is a bit like a male-oriented novel, and focusing on career. From being alone and helpless, later MC find a partner and finally had a teammate who could help each other behind the scenes.

The fun part of this book is the real battles, big and small, just like watching an action movie. There are also investigations and deciphering of various mysteries, so in the end a bosses is killed (yes, there are actually many bosses). This work already has an excellent plot and creativity.

This game plot is not a simple linear plot, but a bit like peeling an onion.

When first observe the world through the eyes of the protagonist, it feel full of mysteries: cyberpunk-style modern cities + terrifying alien creatures + the emergence of player groups + cunning organizations + powerful supernatural powers + the shadow of artificial intelligence + scientists' evil plans + the second world's counterattack plan against the first world... Each point can be expanded upon to write a very colorful story.

Most authors may adopt a more conservative writing approach, such as presenting the above settings separately, and a large paragraph focusing on a certain type of setting... But the author of this book is quite confident in the control of the plot, and only uses ten chapters to throw all the above settings to the stage. After that, almost every plot is advancing in parallel, and the information obtained in each plot will provide some help to the protagonist (who is also the reader). This cruel and crazy world slowly emerges before the eyes of all readers. ‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍

This writing strategy may cause confusion in the early stages, but as long as you are willing to follow the author's thinking, you will enjoy an unparalleled sense of immersion, as if you yourself have personally experienced the protagonist's puzzle solving + adventure + battle.

There are foreshadowings and echoes everywhere.

I like the extra chapter and the words Adam said to Kui Xin was soo sweetttt. Make me hope the author write a chapter about only the two of them growing old together.
 
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