The Marshal’s Wife is The Real Boss Chapter 69 Discussion

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I started reading thru mtl

ch10

This story is pretty interesting! The flow is good and the writing is decent. I'm excited!

ch4

We learn in this chapter why the landscape has changed so much so fast Spoiler

MC experiences an earthquake that basically flattens all the gilding's in the town he found. If this is a prevalent thing that happens with the tectonic plates moving, then the landscape being unrecognizable by the MC and no there being no traces of humans in just ten years makes total sense.

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ch 2

I've started reading and I had low expectations because of the other review but I think it's a bit harsh. Chapter 1 didn't seem as nonsensical as the other reviewer made it sound. The MC basically has super tattered strips of clothing - he isn't nude. We find out in chapter 2 that he replaces it with animal hide. We don't know all the details in chapter 1 but it sounds like he has nothing on himself other than the knife and book because he was escaping after the enemy party (in the war) overwhelmed him with numbers (it sounds like he was undercover or at least targeting spies). The cultivation book is a bit convenient I'll admit that. But I'm sure the author wouldn't detail every single other item he had with him (if he even did) because that would just be extra info we don't really need. And he didn't leave the cave to forage and hunt because when he did try, he was attacked fiercely by animals and he was too weak to fight back then. The 10 years thing - the Mac thinks he might have transmigrated haha but even still, it's an apocalypse setting, this type of fast change is totally possible. This is all to say, for anyone curious about this story, it's not really that nonsensical to start. I think it flows just fine for a fictional story.
 
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