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Alright, quick rundown. TL seems fine, no glaring issues there. Now onto the story – it feels like it's rushing a bit too much, not enough buildup for each arc, and there are some pretty noticeable plot holes, especially for just 19 chapters. Characters? I don't have much to say about this one, judge it for yourself, you will especially like it if you have some sort of fetish for crazy mad yanderes with twisted minds. The plot development feels forced, and the explanations for situations are lacking.But hey, the premise is solid. I'm into these misunderstanding-type novels. Still, gotta say, I've seen quite a few like this, so it's just a 6/10 from me. Not bad, not great. Only 19 chapters in, so I'll hold off on final judgment. Maybe it'll pick up. Guess I'll wait and see if it gets better.