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I dont want to be too harsh but this is basically "I am MC I am overly nice to heroine that I have met for 1 day but only to heroine" the girl he meets randomly whose face he doesnt even know inside game but randomly she turns out heroine.I dont hate generic developement you shouldnt eitherboring thing like spawning in mine and eating bread then seeing heroine old as child is boring thing. Go back to being generic lmaoI will edit review Edit: SUCCS 1*. Go read the original novel this copied idea from Villains in romance are obsessed (villainess or villains)