Green Skin Chapter 6 Discussion

A good story premise, poorly executed.

I was really excited to read this, as I like species evolution novels.

The framework of this novel, the overall plot is good, but the author just skips from one idea to the next without adding story telling.

Such as the action sequences. Spoiler

MC picks up a dagger from a dead goblin, and throws it at the grouped humans. 2 sentences later.... Somehow he has killed 8 humans throwing a dagger. He did not loot any others, he did not time his throws between other goblins attacks.... just poor story telling

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Or story telling between events to bring the world alive.

Spoiler

Him and his new goblin clan kill some humans in a cave. Then they show up back at their camp and show off to the other goblin groups. There are many things that happen between those 2 events. Such as clean up, looting weapons, MC showing leadership skills, like rewarding those under him that ranked up, the description of marching back with dead humans tied to shoulder polls like hunted animals, etc...

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I could only get half way through chapter 6 before dropping this.