- #1
I have big issues with how MC is progressing, I'm at chapter 23.Novel is decent, if we exclude a tiny fact that MC has returned from future, now after including that part story just becomes pretty ridiculous. I stress decent, even without this major flaw it's average or below, but would be readable.It feel like his past knowledge and experience honestly amounted to very little. I mean during tutorial he only got 10 000 points, which is only twice or less he got first time. Seeing as he HP increase skill cost 5000 and he had that. It just didn't feel like MC actually benefited in real way knowing what's going on.Really... 10 years of fighting his life on the line and this is all it amounted to. His decision to go for warrior was very strange in first episode considering what we knew about him, but decision to stick with regular warrior/fighter makes even less sense further we progress. Least he could do is to go for commander route to take advantage of his higher intelligence since he insisted on warrior route. In first place commander evolution seemed to be almost comparable in fighting strength, with added bonus of being leader class. Overall every evolutions he has taken has been centered around something he is not good at :DI mean just from what we know, Goff is either comparable to MC in fighting strength or better at this point, and MC was defeated by North queen girl. That's pretty damn pathetic. If I had 10 years of experience at something and someone did it better after couple months, I would be seriously rethinking what I have done all my life. Overall MC has chosen the most generic route with something he is bad at, while also not capitalizing his single advantage, aka. intelligence (Though based on what I have read he's barely above goblin level). I mean beginning of the story is basically full of internal monologue of MC stating fact he's not good at being warrior. Sigh...I would like to continue but I just can't get over something like this. I'm not giving it one star because I only read 23 chapters, but beginning already made so little sense that it ruined the story. So two stars it is.PS. After writing this review, I read couple other and it seems like story/MC stays about the same so now I'm really glad I quit. So one star.