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currently I am enjoying this, I'm enjoying it mostly because it is cute although it is a little bittersweet, but it'll stop being bittersweet soon, because hopefully they'll meet.this a virtual raising web novel and by that I mean we have an MC who thinks the ML is a game character and in turn is helping the ML, trying to level up, get favourability points and buying things for the ML. As we read we see her growing feelings for this "game character" and her loneliness at not being able to be with him because he's a "game character" we also see the ML's loneliness at not being able to see or touch the MC, who he thinks is a ghost, their summary done.I was engaged in the story, I felt excited at what would happen next and felt that it was heartwarming watching the FL and ML interactions while reading this, which is good in its own right, considering there are some web novel's that don't elicit much response from me, although there are other web novel's that elicit much bigger responses from me, so it's fair to say on a scale of 10 it gets 4.5 (reaction meter) from how much of a response I had while reading it, now now don't be concerned at that number, that's actually quite a good number, for instance if I'm not reading something that has depressing elements you won't get much of a reaction from me, well unless something really shocking happens.anyways moving on to the characters, the characters felt real enough, and by that I mean they were real enough as not to bother me, although there are some things that don't make much sense, for instance I find it strange that the MC thinks of the ML like a real person and is falling in love with him, even though she doesn't actually know that he is real, but I can ignore that considering this is a romance and I don't know how it would progress if it wasn't a little illogical, I digress, the character's aren't that complex but they're not shallow and superficial either, they're what I would call book realistic, you know how on average most web novels are a little illogical at least from what I've red, anyways with web novel's I don't expect every single web novel I read to be a master piece, I expect some flaws in the way characters are, so it's fine as long as they seem real enough in their actions in response to something, for example their expressions, their words, their movement, some can be up to par and some can be below as long as they're not cardboard cut outs, or are super out of character I can be lenient.4/5