President’s Exclusive Alchemist Chapter 144 Discussion

I was actually torn between 3 or 4 stars... but let's just give more..

The story writing itself is fine, a happy go lucky MC that succeeds in whatever he does, all goes smooth for him.

As someone mentioned before, the ML is a bit random, he fell with MC fast.. and the repeated sentence about staring helplessly indulging the MC, or the dark stare whatever was giving me goosebumps overtime.

They were mentioned way too much, so that when that kind of expression were used on an extra, I got another goosebumps x_x

Spoiler

I kinda want to shout to ML, who are you to stare to MC indulgingly!? You're way weaker than him anyway, ML should feel some complicated inferior feeling of wanting to protect, instead of "indulging stare", you don't have the capability to "indulge" MC in anything yet, anyway! Honestly that gives me goosebumps!

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