After Flirting With the Male Lead’s Harem… I Messed Up Chapter Completed Discussion

Hate to break it to the readers, but the story is severely rushed.

I read the whole thing, the concept was great in the beginning but there is no character build up. There’s only repetitive actions from the MC to the different FLs but in different strategies.

Then in the near ending, it’s really a “wtf did I just read moment.” Because:

Spoiler

After the whole receptive plot of how the MC wants the FLs—specifically Youming (her previous life’s black cat but later transmigrated into one of the OG MC’s harem member) and Huan Shi (the future nine-tailed fox queen from OG MC’s harem) — to spend on her without spending a dime (or spirit stone) herself, the plot took a sudden dive again.

When they returned to the sect, her master (another FL) kicked them out of the barrier to prevent them from entering the sect so she could keep MC to herself and “felt threatened” by Huan Shi’s cultivation level. So she “decided to suddenly ascend into immortality” instead of neglecting it and focusing on her alchemy. When she skipped levels from Nascent to Spirit something then to Transcendence, the master—Chu Man— grabbed MC to ascend and they “accidentally transcended to the wrong plane” which happened to be MC’s home planet, Earth.

Mind you, there was no foreshadowing of this. 😐 Also, after transcending, Chu Man (her master) “suddenly” regained memories of her past life and the bs was that her soul was split into fragments of the other harem members and they were originally one person. This fu—

Anyways, MC now back in her place, skipping all fillers, decided to enjoy one month on Earth with her master before the others finally caught up and transcended to find her. There’s also supposedly a huge time different between earth and cultivation world so it was ten years past after the master took MC with her.

Author proceed to generalized the plot of their time on earth and after twenty years, MC transcended and they all followed her to teleport to the actual immortal realm. Only for the f**king chapter to end with the FL harem members “merging back into one soul” bs. Gosh, you don’t understand how angry I was. And LITERALLY, the MC was “stunned” to see a white haired beauty behind her when she turned to find the group who followed her. THE STORY REALLY JUST ENDED LIKE THIS:

Now, she had become immortal.

She ascended to the Immortal Realm.

Moreover, she experienced a peaceful and joyful time on Earth.

She achieved everything she wanted.

Stepping out of the passage, Song Cha felt no anxiety.

She believed she would live well in this world.

Thinking this, Song Cha looked to the side to check on Chu Man and the others.

But what she saw stunned her.

Where were Chu Man and the others?

Why was there a stranger?

This woman in white had a dangerously alluring aura.

Seeing Song Cha looking at her, the woman smiled indulgently, “Cha Cha, darling, come with me.”

“Who are you?” Song Cha couldn’t help but ask.

The woman responded without hesitation, “I am your master, your beautiful sister, your contract beast, and... ”

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REALLY, that was the last sentences, of the last chapter, of the “extra” of the novel. IM SO MAD, UGH I WASTED MY TIME. You’re welcome for the sacrifice. Anyways, rant over. After ranting, I should have done a negative infinite.