- #1
This story is full of fluff cuteness and decently funny, however I believe there is a big issue with the author's writing. Every time a problem is introduced in the story, it gets solved in the most anticlimactic and "plot convenience" way possible.Spoiler
If, say the MC had a problem (this problem if not fixed could end the world). She would only need to worry for like 2 seconds before she realizes that, conveniently her dad gave her a toy which can magically fix the world ending problem and it just so happened to be in her storage pouch (She would only have her storage pouch with her). This just lazy writing. I could probably think of a better solution to this problem then, "yeah I conveniently have a device that can fix the worlds ending problem" (This was all in a semi serious tone if I recall)
[collapse]^If you don't want to read the spoiler it's basically if a detective solved a case because 10 years ago he saw a newspaper that contained crucial evidence (Crucial evidence as in listing the killer's name, address, where to find him, or something similar) needed for his current caseThis occurs multiple times throughout the story although through less severe and ridiculous situations.Tl;DR lazy writing, too much plot armor, good fluff and humor