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Okay let's say you were thrown in an familiar game world and you have a system telling what to do but you can get killed as many times you want and in each end of the story you get skills without any hardwork and understanding but " You're a failure ". Even with this things given out MC is still incompetent. This guy is not even trying to understand the reason why he should raise the fMC. If you are going to raise her stop getting emotional and raise her understand how world works then raise her but whom am I to say to change the story for my like. This is just my thought if it had gone with MC raising her without getting emotional and simping the fMC all the time maybe I would have liked the storySpoiler
There is a prologue where MC was dumped by her ex girlfriend because he is a failure and after he was thrown into the game world he gets attracted to the fMC saying it's this body's fault really your ex girlfriend just dumped you but here you are trying your are best to get to that girl without any remorse and trying his best to make her like him. That's why she dumped you if you had atleast tried your best your ex-girlfriend might not have left you
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