Raising the Princess to Overcome Death Chapter 23 Discussion

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Hard to rate it for technically reading so little, this is for warning before you read.

s*x s*avery and Prostitution tragedy.

The setting is inherently hostile: the given goal and the world built make it inevitable for tragedies to happen in progressing to that goal, the system's way of ending of a loop is gamelike and the transition into the next story is a moment, no time for a payoff, closure or letting the emotions of a tragedy settle in a realistic way. This slows down the development of the main characters in a contrived way.

And so far, no decent payoff or message but I hope those further ahead can clarify.

I think its existence will measure the worth of this type of story.
 
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