The Eldest Martial Sister Gave Up Treatment Chapter 900 Discussion

4/5

The novel is decent and pretty easy to read. Everything is good and sound but the novel fails in its main objective "to hug junior sisters thigh"

In the middle of the story, MC becomes overly strong and independent. The battle is full of struggle and tears but there's a problem. From every battle, the MC became stronger and stronger while all of her junior sisters were still stuck at the entry power level. The author has no way out but to add a side story to boost the junior sister's level by +10 repeatedly but it still fails to catch up in a reasonable time frame. The novel turns into a story about the senior sister soloing all the bad guys and overly protective of her junior sister instead.

The reward choice mechanic also has a small problem. The author took a lot of time to explain every epic reward in detail just so that the MC will never choose it. When there's a time the MC has to take a risk unrelated to the reward benefit, it's too much of a coincidence for it to be the thing that she needs. It's understandable that there's a huge risk associated with a great reward. And for some silly risk of being beaten by her master in exchange for great power with no possibility of death, she never took it. Sometimes, in any RPG genre, you will have to take it just to make your character build work.

Master Ah Lan also has a major plot hole. The MC claim that if her master flex too much it will expose her immortal title due to her unique spear or healing skill set. It's even more unreasonable for someone at the pinnacle of immortality, complete with 8 avenues, plus vast knowledge in many secret arts, array, ETC. To be unable to use any other means to win a fight and not expose yourself.

Anyway, the MC is cute and the interaction between the sisters is interesting. The novel is great up to about chapter 700. After that, from chapter 750 to 900, it's filled to the brim with junior sister's side stories and MC is also the one that has to solve it at that. At this moment, the dependable MC is already the strongest in the world. The author has no choice but to summon handicapped immortals down from the upper realm to keep something ahead of the MC.