- #1
So far, I like how is this going.I'll tell I few things that keep me reading this.
- The MC sees the ML (Dante) as a friend, she recognizes that he's handsome, but that's all.
- The misunderstanding is funny because when MC says that she'll leave people think she is telling that because she'll die.
- It seems ML is getting the "ML disease", obsession.
- Dante is a puppy like boyfriend, he's strong and is feared by the aristocrats and vassals, but he behaves sweet and shows a weak appearance towards MC.
- The plot develops mostly in the Duke's house, they hardly go outside.
- The maids treatment towards the MC is kinda annoying, they often lie about things when MC ask them question or their opinion, they see the MC like a glass doll or a kid because they do that just to "protect MC and make the MC feel better or happy".
- Some extras are worth using for create drama or a new conflict to make things interesting, but they are hardly used or mentioned, some of them are the Og MC family, the imperial family or the Og FL (maybe in the future the Og FL may appear, but as the story goes I don't think she'll involved too much in the relationship between ML and MC).
- Some other elements mentioned in the story aren't used, it seems that the environment where the MC lives has magic or spiritual power (not sure which one because I read the MTL) and monster, but there aren't fights or scenes where people use magic.
- One thing that doesn't make sense to me related to the point above is that the story describe the north family and the Duke as the ones who are the strongest in the kingdom, they use magic and can fight monsters, that's why they protect the north, then why the imperial family treat them like s*aves and the ML and his family allow it? I hope author explains this point ahead in the story.