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Very dull overall.Here the biggest problem lies in that that FL as a character is not developed at all. She just exists to read notifications on how OP she's becoming and what great items she's getting, while doing basically nothing. No real adventuring either. A good chunk in the begging is an Apology Ark for some third grade cannon fodder character, who by the way still has more personality than FL.And so naturally, the comedy just falls through. It's supposed to be a juxtaposition on how FL pretends to be docile and fragile, but is in reality greedy and brash, but none of that really gets shown, we're just told by the author how she is. And so when the time comes for the big "funny" moment, well, it's just there written out like an ingredient list for tacos, like a sitcom without a laugh track