Unaware That My Legitimate Sister Is My Husband Chapter 18 Discussion

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This story... I can't figure out how to describe and rate it.

It's not badly written, it has a lot of confusing things but overall you can understand it and the translation is good, apart from a few too many repetitions (reading "legitimate sister" for the third time in the same sentence starts to get heavy), but probably it's due to the wattpad style of the story itself.

The protagonists... well, they are the classic Chinese historical novel protagonists; the MC is a white lotus, she thinks a lot but does nothing but cry and hope that fate or someone else will solve the problems for her; the ML is literally a chestnut hedgehog between the buttocks, its only quality is to be powerful and beautiful, all the rest not received. More and more of FL however, which has only beauty from her (being incompetent).

all the others are jokers, they have no purpose in their life other than to throw a spanner in MC's works and make a fool of themselves with senseless jealousy.

Up to here, everything is normal, there would be nothing different from hundreds of other novels of the same type; but what leaves me shocked is that often and willingly it is written as if it were an R-15 story, with s*xual innuendos and a continuous pressure on the incredible beauty and sensuality of the protagonist.

Which would be normal, except that the aforementioned protagonist IS 10 YEARS OLD GIRL.

TEN D*MNED YEARS.

I may be too old, but I think 10-year-old girls should fight each other over who has the prettiest dress or the coolest toy, or who's going to eat the slice of cake with the most strawberries on it.

Don't go to war to find a husband and destroy the honor and lives of your peers, even sisters.

And above all, don't be portrayed as sexy as they bleed from pins hidden in the dress.

WTF.
 
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