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An example is that MC was alone with a girl (Sybil) in a dungeon after being separated from the group. Sybil gets lethally poisoned and is saved by MC. In addition she gets to hear some interesting things about the MC, some of which seems to even inspire her. You would think she would somehow get entangled with the MC especially after knowing that she is described as a "villain" with an ability to subconsciously bend fate to favor her but nope after it was said she survived there was no mention of her. A character like her who craves excitement just disappears in the story for several chapters after witnessing such interesting events is just unbelievable.
[collapse]sometimes it skips certain details as to how things happenedSpoilerOne example is how MC got the viscouelastic metal. It was being auctioned as it was being paraded as Baldur's kryptonite which is the Mistletein and MC had proven it was a fake. He was rewarded by his father since he prevented him from using Gram (a super important sword) as payment for a fake but the reward MC decided on was to have a good look at Gram to replicate it using his ability. As for why he also got the fake Mistletein, I have no idea. Did the Zodiac guy reward MC for showing such bold action? Did his family win and gave it to him? Did every participating family just gave up after seeing it is a fake and just let MC have it?
I honestly have no clue as the story doesn't bother telling me
[collapse]and even completely disregarding some events to the point that I had to recheck chapters. Forgetting such events so early in the story isn't giving me any hope for this novel.SpoilerIn chapter 8, Quinie and MC coincidentally met and had a bet whether a painting in the museum is fake or not. In the end MC won and Quinie had to give MC a lot of money but this entire thing was not mentioned or even hinted to have happened in any future interactions between these two. Hell when these two met each other again they said that the last time they have met was in the auction of the fake Mistletein (which happened earlier that when they met at the museum).
[collapse]In addition to that, the translation quality is making it worse especially since this story constantly shifts the POV. Names kept on changing, pronouns is used for the wrong gender and some sentences becoming difficult to understand.