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The plot feels wierdly forced. Its like the author is trying to think of everything he can on how to make the MC look like a pitiable person that is oh so unfortunately hated by everything. This just makes the whole story feel very unnatural as a whole.The bullies are 2 dimensional, paper-cut archetype. The characters have emotional management issues (like wth??). Have adrupt outburst that's unnecessary af. Also the quirky remarks are cringe af.The problems presented in this story is also superficial and unrealistic. It's the typical MC 'hides his power and reveals only when plot is needed.' The reason to hide his power is because otherwise the villianous brother will find out and kill him. Which is pretty uh... how do I put it? Weirdly convenient? (Go see the story and you will find out what I mean) It feels weird because MC keeps jumping around between hiding his power to showing off alot.And goddammit do I have to stress? So many pop-up problems presented into the story is painted like its a behemoth of a struggle. Either that or it's the "unfortunately MC isnt going to have his way because why not". This sucks ass because author keeps making these pop-up problems seem hard and tense (not tense at all btw), but sh*t is just solved so immaturely and easily and then forgotten afterwards. No reflections, no character development. No tension at all.The recruitment of side characters is so easy makes me think MC is a human magnet. Sympathy for the MC is just there for the sake of being there. Unluckiness for the MC is just there for the sake of being there. Misunderstandings is just there for the sake of being there. MC getting rekt is just there fkr the sake of being there. This whole story is just a plethora of easy plot conveniece, really. Cliche even. There's no real genuine link or connection that makes me want to root for MC.