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This novel is good, but it's a little bit too one-note. For the first few chapters, there is only one goal, and it spans the entire week without focusing on anything that could be interesting.Overall, the characters have personalities, but not character arcs. The world-building seems okay and the plot is one note. Another issue I have with the plot is that everything is managed by the system - just read Chapter 1 for example. Basically, I do not see the benefit of having the system in this story and instead, I think it would be far more beneficial if all the system ideas/suggestions were Mc's own. Decent if you have nothing else to read.Spoiler
I also don't like how quickly MC overcame his illnesses or how he recovered from it - it would be interesting to see how he could adapt to such a situation without magic kinda like a smart persona but super weak but ehh personal gripe, I guess.
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