The Master of the Brave Chapter 152 Discussion

Good story, with a very good world construction, the heroine is the best of this. The secondary ones are enjoyable, and the antagonists except for a couple are very forgettable, the MC is a person too very attached to his codes.

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There are decisions that I do not share, I end up being an open ending where it is up to the reader to define how the Mc's romantic relationship remains, the truth is that the relationship is a love triangle where I consider that one of the parties is over and it's very forced ("Cornelia excuse me girl"), but hey. It is excessively redundant in many parts with almost entire pages of repeated exposure, in the end things turn out very quickly, the beginning of the work is very good but it is fading.

One thing after a while, is that Lutecia seems to be very young or how the thing is, the logical thing first before all is to talk to Wing and plant solutions, according to her, wherever they go they will be hated, she never consults with Wing To see if he wants to leave the empire, nor do they raise an argument, they had her chained to the empire because she wanted to, easily she had more options than to do nothing sincerely she does not act with much intelligence the truth, being that she took the initiative in the end, the plot of the half-elf at the end is irrelevant, it doesn't add anything.

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