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It is not surprising that the book is not popular.The plot? Where is the plot? He's gone.A consistent development of events? Smooth transition between scenes? Nope.An interesting character? Doesn't matter psychopath, mu*derer, sociopath, conqueror, rabbit, cold, smart, cunning, charming, charismatic, impotent? Not a single coincidence!The hero must be alive and try to "be, not seem"! Why do we need a dead inside who behaves like a "cool guy with irony on himself", but at the same time is a dull, lifeless, boring clown.Do you know what happens when "a cat's balls are cut off"? He loses the joy of life, it is not so interesting to watch him.Building a world? Absolutely nothing, up to chapter 40, the entire event takes place within 1 km in diameter. Incredibly boring and pointless!Conspiracies, history, travel? Nothing!The author repeats the mistakes of beginners, at the beginning of the book the main character encounters a local boss who uses him as a rag, he is used through conspiracies several times, and he? Nothing, he knows about it, we know about it, the author knows about it! And nothing!The feeling of helplessness is conveyed directly to the reader, because not everyone is a vegetable without brains as the author of this shit, and can assimilate themselves with MC. Put yourself in the place of the main character!There is nothing but pleasure and disappointment all around! I came here for positive and from time to time negative emotions, but in the end I see how the MC got into the past with a useless and uncontrolled golden finger, while the character of the hero is as undecided as 99% of the losers of society. He doesn't even know what he wants, from life, from the world, from himself. A useless piece of garbage in the shape of a humanoid.Some negative emotions, confusion of events, amoeba MC, zero plot, zero butterfly effect.
