A Nest of Snakes Inside an Old Tomb Chapter 12 Discussion

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I won't be rating this novel as I have dropped it.

The main reason for dropping it is due to the mc's personality. He's very childish and selfish, so much that it's irritating. I'm really not a fan of this type of character.

The premise of the novel is interesting but I feel like it's not executed well. The humour in the first couple of chapters is decent, then it starts to feel like it's trying to hard. There are moments where the author tries to break the fourth wall for comedic value but it falls flat, and sometimes disrupts the rhythm.

The translation is okay. It's not great but it's better than "just about readable".

I was trying to hang on until the ML arrived as this is tagged early romance, but 12 chapters in, he hasn't arrived and the MC has annoyed me too much.
 
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