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I enjoyed the story, but the last forth felt like it switched to just telling what happened. Very rushed feeling and I spent about 20 chapters expecting that it was an epilogue (because of so much telling and speeding through events) only for it to keep going. It's a lot like Bringing Good Luck to your Husband in the '70s except this one is finished and (so far) I think Bringing Good Luck to your Husband in the '70s is done better.