Civil Servant in Romance Fantasy Chapter 37 Discussion

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enjoyable and unique. I only have one problem with it, I'm not sure if it's the translation or what but sometimes I'm not sure if it's MC pov or what. Also, the story is heavily focused on us being inside the character's head and hearing his thoughts, ex. MC does a lot of things in a month but we know what he did through his dialogue with himself or complaining, so there's no background and setting the scene, we just directly hear mc's thoughts and so we know where we are and what's happening, it gets tiring after a while.

However, if you get used to it then it's all right.
 
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