Swear Fealty To Me, My Subjects! Chapter 565 Discussion

Alright now first of all I was someone who like harem genre Massive (More than 20 woman), Big (under 20), Normal (under 10) Small (under 5) harem.

I know and read at novelupdateds from 2017-2018 when the first time I read novel but this is my first comment and my English is not good enough so there Will some wrong writing.

Now about this novel there Will some pro and con.

For someone who not like confusing story, no in*est, scumbag MC or massive Harem without love then this is not for you.

MC not think with his lower body but think of using his lower body.

This my explanation

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MC :

- this is his 1000th reincarnation and live with 10.000 years of life

- extremely handsome (main/true god)

- he is mortal with wisdom and experience more than true/main god

- Not naive and optimist

- he became tired of his life and sell his body to the enemy (S3ggss)

- become extremely playboy/scumbag

- so every enemy of his past life Will become his harem (Tools) except some

-he Will sell his body to make enemy join or do anything for him

- his true love in harem can we count with one hand and the other is his tool to help him

- event main/true god lose sanity cause by his talk, touch and S3ggss

- Except his true love everything his enemy

- MC get Olivia (God of lust) eye every woman who look at him Will see him from handsome prince to extremely handsome, beautiful and lustful being. So even if he talk to a women the woman Will like lustful being (S3ggss). For mortal woman they Will get 100% charm, for demigod 70-80% and for above demigod 30-50% effect.

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So in other word MC Broken being like personalities, wisdom or power (S3ggss), he know what to do and really lucky to get what he want.

When I read on MTL site there Will be a lot of word change like status or name. So there Will some Miss in what I explain.

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Character in novel :

- There 9 Creator God (True/Main God)

- a lot of servant God (God)

- a lot of undying angel and evil chosen (God Right-hand)

- a lot of demigod (God servant)

- Billions of low evil being (Evil God servant)

- a lot of high pure blood mortal (God descendants)

* God descendants means creation of that god, MC is in this status

- a mortal

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World story

- the world was a game

- MC first reincarnation from child, when die he came to checkpoint time

- for 999th life MC failure cause betrayed or lose when fight

- on 1000th life MC became tired of fight/killing and make use of his body (S3ggss) to make harem (tools)

- in 1000th every timeline and life of some true/main God or equal is cross time

- from pure kid to pure evil

- Enemies become lover with lust eye (Black Dragon God lust Olivia Eyes power)

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For the pro of the novel

- Massive Harem

- MC not naive and manipulative

- don't surprise at any change character

- All heroin virg*n

- OP (Experience, Wisdom and At Bed)

Cons :

- Bad Writing

- Skip explaination

- Skip Story

- Disappear of some character

- Forget some story

- different of some story

- break of some character

- not logical theory

- etc (forgot what I want to write)

From my explanation the writer is maybe tired when write some story or did want to end this novel fast enough. So went you look from first story to middle there Will a lot of plot hole and some story hole that did not tell in this novel. So if you want to understand this novel you Will have headache.

For me Harem story is number one story line is number Ten so I give 5 star and if the ending were bad/sad then I Will give this novel one or two star.

For you want to know why the character is broken like 100.000 years old virg*n or 1 million old virg*n become sl*t cause MC then this is the explaination

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First MC is handsome then with Olivia eye he become handsome being even true God lust at him.

So his eye Will become corruption for women then plus with his wisdom scumbag talk or experience scumbag action the woman Will become lust.

And this world demigod or upper being is look at mortal like ant and not lustful. So they will not know what relationship with opposite s*x is like. Meanwhile our MC is experience scumbag so for them MC is like artistic who will paint a black canvas

They will don't know MC is court them and take what MC say to their heart plus MC eyes that corrupt their mind. Make their body hot and itch for MC

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So their broken character is logical Its just the time for their broken too fast that make it not logical.

So if you don't believe this then You see in irl how a experience playboy / Fvcboi hook their target. And that what this novel use.

This is for me, maybe there some wrong word or confusing thing. Iam sorry.

Thanks