Swear Fealty To Me, My Subjects! Chapter 225 Discussion

Someone that read the MTL

This is my first time doing a review so take it with a grain of salt

This is the first time I read a novel that depict the interc**rse so k*nky yet funny since they write it like "pop a champagne" not literally describe the actual scene but definitely the most fetish-ish interc**rse scene that I've read ever in novel

I really enjoy the story and the world how the MC try to conquer his enemies in bed and make them his weapon for the sake of fighting the greater danger

With that being said here's the reason why I decided to write a review for the first time

Spoiler

The Far Silences/Outer World (?) arc is where the story becomes messy at least in my opinion, the first point here is God King.

God King is a character that depicted as someone that disregard every thing from his subjects, the muscle brain, naive, and not a single good thing he has ever done when this character was introduced, yet at the end of the arc he suddenly becomes the key piece for MC strat, He knows that he's an incompetent king, He don't mind his consort got taken by the MC, and willing to withstand absurd pain for the sake of High Elf, all of it just too sudden. or at least there's not enough character progression to justify the heroic turn of this self-centered king.

tl;dr a complete 180 character turn

And the second one is Star God

this one I don't really mind, but definitely her appearance is so sudden and the disappearance is too quick there should've been foreshadow of her, it's like her only function is for 1 plot device and then done, well I can't say that for sure since I haven't finished it but yeah

tl;dr a sudden plot device

The third one is Empress Thea

I think her appearance is unnecessary, at least too early, we haven't even met all of the guard... but I don't really mind this since the bed scene is good...

tl;dr definitely a sudden plot device

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All and all the only thing I really don't like is Spoiler

God King

[collapse] sudden turn, and probably the power scale that kinda not consistent definitely the best k*nky harem novel that I've ever read