Pretending To Have A Girlfriend? Chapter -- Discussion

  • Thread starter Nickaido
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Okay, prologue shows you a window on how the story would unfold. The MC and the women around him are irritating and badly written. It’s a novel that is hard to read with little to no payoff. When you introduce a novel like you need to first make the reader like a particular FL to root for but also engage the readers with your MC. This novel can’t do any of that.
 
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