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Going through the first world, although there were some stuff I personally didn't like, it was still a nice read. But then proceeding to the next arc, the problems continue and so I decided to just drop it than expect it will turn out great. My main issue with the story is MC having the Mary Sue halo. She is written without much a flaw, the only flaw the author could have work on (her view of love) wasn't developed and instead was preach as the right thing. Thus, the story becomes a bit dull. The only times it becomes interesting is when there's face slapping or POV of the enemy. Otherwise, it's just fillers and bland. Then the romance is also not that great. Her relationship with ML felt too shallow to the point that you would pity the ML more for staying with this kind of person who can't appreciate your value. Love is not just about being happy, or else we just need drugs. The author failed to understand this, thinking all it matters is being happy, even if the other side had almost become like a dog who follows her orders. My boi, that's not love that's a servant. Initially I had huge hopes for this story especially with the first world dirty garbage's father attitude. Spoiler
"Dad, I want to join the company."
"Are you drunk?"
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[collapse] However the MC is too perfect that I can't relate at all with her. The story is also a bit unrealistic and at times contradict certain information.